My most recent concentration piece focused more on the lower part of a person. My previous pieces have all been about faces and I wanted to change it up a bit. I am still developing my concentration, but so far I feel like my focus is on manipulating images. The first one I pulled the picture and recently have been overlapping multiple pictures.
I like this piece a lot vincent! i like how you have started to evolve your concentration a bit more, and it definitely shows growth from the first piece. A few things though: i would have liked to see the legs go off of the page on three sides, rather than just the top and bottom as it is now. maybe if you cut off a little bit of one of the sides? im not sure... also, I think you still need to push your darks and lights; this piece probably looks better in person, but on the photograph you can really tell where the darks need to be darker. Overall though, I really like what you did with the compostion, and the fact that you strayed from the original idea to incorporate other body parts too. great job! :)
ReplyDeleteVincent you are cool and you're a cool artist. Clearly you can make very realistic and beautiful pieces, but I think you need to push your self more. I really like the mixture of different people and shoes but I'd love to see a change to the plain backgrounds. I think you should play with color whether that be only doing a section or put a wash in the background. Your concentration has such great potential!
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